I am perfectly fine with you looking it over. I admit I am a bit new to writing these and my wording definitely needs some work and I’d be happy to hear your thoughts and critique!
Is this you? https://archiveofourown.org/works/40569615 Just wondering - it seems like it's your Primal AU, but I'm not sure given that there's no links. Just curious, TBH. [Will have questions about the AU itself coming shortly. Wanted to split them into their own ask so you could reply separately.]
Yep that’s me! The whole Fics still a work in progress and chapter 2 is a work in progress but I’ve got the ideas for it down and I’ll hopefully have it up soon!