even though it makes me insane in the first place
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"I don't know if I should add this, it probably has too many details already."
ADD IT. PLEASE ADD IT. ADD MORE.
Overwriting is about prose; when you get to into it about the colors of flower petals and the intricacies of Victorian era wallpaper. It is absolutely NOT when you include immersive details.
Like a wanted poster while your character waits at the register, only way later does the man on the poster show up.
Fit little things in anywhere you can. No they arenβt imperative but they are though.
Don't spend ages describing the way light reflects off a glass of water. Focus on it a reasonable amount and then move onto to the messy stack of books beside it. Then the hastily folded and stuffed clothes peeking out of the dresser. Show us the dust collecting on a bell at the hotel check in, everywhere except the tip. Show me the heat of her breath hitting to cool air and making a brief cloud of fog. Then move onto the frost eroding tree bark. Half empty salt and pepper shakers in a diner. Wet paw prints on the floor after a rainstorm. Muddy tire tracks leading off road. Anything that doesn't take us completely off quest. Immerse me with the narrative. Drown me in the details. But donβt go all bible-prose on my ass.
It doesn't have to be 'important' to the plot to be important to the experience.
I made a playlist for my rosekiller fic......
link to the fic if you wanna read it!!
Tyty I'm not sure yet tho so we'll see
would y'all be interested in me possibly making a webseries??
like idk what it'd be about, but it would be like short chapters about different characters
and sometimes it's just funny stuff, but other times it's actually lore and chapters
would y'all be interested in me possibly making a webseries??
like idk what it'd be about, but it would be like short chapters about different characters
and sometimes it's just funny stuff, but other times it's actually lore and chapters
Bad news, y'all
You really gotta write the damn book to become a published author
GASP OMG YAY
im honored that we shared braincells omg(like we had the same thoughts) (and THANK YOU OMG)(those compliments always make me so happy)
I made a playlist for my rosekiller fic......
link to the fic if you wanna read it!!
Im glad!!!! it's lowk what I listened to while writing it
I made a playlist for my rosekiller fic......
link to the fic if you wanna read it!!
"One thing I'll never do is beg someone to choose me" - abt 300 words
I stared at the phone that contained all the messages of my love. Of my devotion. And yet that was how you repaid me. By playing with my feelings. Telling me that I was everything you wanted but now Iβm nothing at all. You let me begin to love you, let me believe you would stay. In the end I gave my heart away and you threw it astray.
I know I donβt love you any more, that much is true. I do dislike you, as much as a girl that used to be in love could. I always had a feeling that the βusβ would soon end. I didnβt want to believe it, and deluded myself anyway. I couldnβt- Wouldnβt see past the way you treated me; So gentle, so warmly. I let myself believe those touches were real, that you meant every word. But now I see you with her, so soon after we ended and I wonder if it was all just a lie. Every minute, every second, all this time, you never liked me. I was just in my fantasy, not facing reality, the truth.
Maybe you did like meβ¦
But it was never going to be love. Not for us. I hope you're happy with her, since I couldnβt make you feel that way. I donβt like you, no not anymore. No more tears will be ever wasted on you. But I am jealous, just a little. That she gets the you I wanted to have, but in the end I wonβt choose you. I donβt like you, I donβt love you, I donβt want to be your friend. I would never choose you over me, and I will never beg for you back.
You are the bare minimum and I do not need you. You can take your scarce texting, you barely holding my hand, all of that. Give it to her, or donβt. I wouldnβt wish that on anyone. So I take back what I said.
I donβt hope you're happy, I hope she is.
Cause I used to be her, and I donβt want her to be replaced too. She shouldnβt have to beg for your attention, and I shouldnβt have to either. Iβm glad I didnβt. You can be a nice guy but a horrible boyfriend. And thatβs what you were.
-Confessions of an Ex- Girlfriend
YAY!!!!
I made a playlist for my rosekiller fic......
link to the fic if you wanna read it!!
"Don't be scared. You're allowed to speak. If I wanted you to be quiet, I'd do something about it."
salty air and harsh wood rubbing on wounds, making them worse.
manual labor as a punishment, scrubbing the deck all night until whumpeeβs back aches and their knees are raw.
lashings. good olβ lashings.
Whumpee, an important passenger on another ship, gets captured by pirates and taken hostage.
tossed in the brig, a dark, dingy, cramped space with chains and metal bars.
drowning!
a sword pressed against their throat as theyβre presented to the captain. (forced to kneel??)
Forced to join the crew and doing their chores with shackles on their ankles.
Strapped to the main mast, exposed to the elements (and the cut throat crew) and completely at their mercy.
Stuck in the crowβs nest (especially during a storm)
A new peg leg. Might seem silly but Iβd like to see YOU laugh while walking on a chunk of wood with a newly healing leg stump.
cant think of anything else rn but feel free to add on!
my taglist is open by the way ;)
@toads-and-gremlins
@whump-till-ya-jump
@herhighnessthegoblinqueen
@scoundrelwithboba
I made a playlist for my rosekiller fic......
link to the fic if you wanna read it!!
Theia actually hates the winter
she hates the heat, but she hates the snow more
Okay wait that question I sent triggered smth in me now I gotta go write βπ»βπ»
OOP OKAY HAVE FUN!!!
TYYYY π«Άπ«Ά TRUST YOU'LL BE HEARING ABOUT THEM THE MOST
so starting with my complete and utter brain child R.P(I'm gonna shorten it to that from now on)
starting off strong with.....
Theia Woodrose β my wonderful mc
Basic rundown of her:
reliable, loyal and very traumatized
was almost a human sacrifice(we <3 mom)
hates her mom(it's not just a phase)
17 years old
ran away from home when she was 9
doesn't use her last name btw
is well trained in sword and magic(self taught)
Liliana Woodrose β The Princess
Basic rundown:
The princess of the Woodrose kingdom
She's 13 years old
Enfp if that counts for anything
Very caring
Has not manifested her magic yet
We <3 mom(but seriously)
Celestine Woodrose β The Queen
Basic rundown:
Bitch. (not affectionately)
Manipulative bitch
efficient bitch
I don't like her
Hates little kids(I'm laughing cause y'all don't get it)
The Queen of the Woodeose kingdom
Hates her husband
she's like 54 years old
Franklin β The dragonborn
Basic rundown:
was human trafficked/a slave
she's a bitch(affectionate)
lowkey sadistic
Reliable
very much "eye for an eye" core
is 23 years old
her hair color is closer to the second one
Tara Theron β The vampire
Basic rundown:
Forest vampire
very sweet and bubbly
will kill you with a smile
but again, very sweet
is away from home due to reasons
17 years old
she's a cutie pie
(SHE'S SUPPOSED TO BE BLACK BUT THE OTHER PICREW I USED WOULDN'T WORK SO THE WHITE ONE IS HER FIRST DESIGN)
Royce Dionne β The fallen prince
Basic rundown:
Traumatized but hot and funny so it totally cancels out(his words not mine)(it doesn't)
16 years old
humor to cope type shit
Used to be the prince of the Dionne Empire
Theia's best friend
Very good with a sword
Griffin Travers β The seer
Basic rundown:
He's a seer(can see bits and pieces of the future)
is very much low-key blind(his prescription goes crazy)
He's only 10(MY BABY)
His father is a guild leader
a very sweet boy, despite everything people say about him
Theia's his best friend(in a kid sorta way)
Asteri ******** β The ghost
Basic rundown:
sassy ass bitch
is stuck in a kid's body for a while but is like 24 I'm actuality
she gets a grown up body eventually dw it's just ghost shit logistics
Y'all get no more info on her
Sennen β ???????
Basic rundown:
We don't talk about him :3
that's for me to know and you to find out
BUT THATS EVERYONE FOR NOW!!!!! I'd love asks about them if you have anything you wanna know!!
RAHHHHH THANK YOU!!!! I LOVE MY BABIES SM
so starting with my complete and utter brain child R.P(I'm gonna shorten it to that from now on)
starting off strong with.....
Theia Woodrose β my wonderful mc
Basic rundown of her:
reliable, loyal and very traumatized
was almost a human sacrifice(we <3 mom)
hates her mom(it's not just a phase)
17 years old
ran away from home when she was 9
doesn't use her last name btw
is well trained in sword and magic(self taught)
Liliana Woodrose β The Princess
Basic rundown:
The princess of the Woodrose kingdom
She's 13 years old
Enfp if that counts for anything
Very caring
Has not manifested her magic yet
We <3 mom(but seriously)
Celestine Woodrose β The Queen
Basic rundown:
Bitch. (not affectionately)
Manipulative bitch
efficient bitch
I don't like her
Hates little kids(I'm laughing cause y'all don't get it)
The Queen of the Woodeose kingdom
Hates her husband
she's like 54 years old
Franklin β The dragonborn
Basic rundown:
was human trafficked/a slave
she's a bitch(affectionate)
lowkey sadistic
Reliable
very much "eye for an eye" core
is 23 years old
her hair color is closer to the second one
Tara Theron β The vampire
Basic rundown:
Forest vampire
very sweet and bubbly
will kill you with a smile
but again, very sweet
is away from home due to reasons
17 years old
she's a cutie pie
(SHE'S SUPPOSED TO BE BLACK BUT THE OTHER PICREW I USED WOULDN'T WORK SO THE WHITE ONE IS HER FIRST DESIGN)
Royce Dionne β The fallen prince
Basic rundown:
Traumatized but hot and funny so it totally cancels out(his words not mine)(it doesn't)
16 years old
humor to cope type shit
Used to be the prince of the Dionne Empire
Theia's best friend
Very good with a sword
Griffin Travers β The seer
Basic rundown:
He's a seer(can see bits and pieces of the future)
is very much low-key blind(his prescription goes crazy)
He's only 10(MY BABY)
His father is a guild leader
a very sweet boy, despite everything people say about him
Theia's his best friend(in a kid sorta way)
Asteri ******** β The ghost
Basic rundown:
sassy ass bitch
is stuck in a kid's body for a while but is like 24 I'm actuality
she gets a grown up body eventually dw it's just ghost shit logistics
Y'all get no more info on her
Sennen β ???????
Basic rundown:
We don't talk about him :3
that's for me to know and you to find out
BUT THATS EVERYONE FOR NOW!!!!! I'd love asks about them if you have anything you wanna know!!
now for my other child that's recently inhabited my brain πππ low-key have a plot for this, just haven't planned it enough, and there's only two characters so......
Luciana (have not decided a last name yet)
Rundown:
immortal
wants to die
very skilled with a gun
she's been alive way too long
quiet but opinionated
knows how to get shit done
horrible memory tho NGL
she's like over 100 I forget when she's born
Matteo (I forgot his last name)
Basic rundown:
Golden retriever personified
has seen some shit ngl
yearning for this girl (once he ends up w the crush)
new recruit
just wants to impress pookie
is very good with poison
so starting with my complete and utter brain child R.P(I'm gonna shorten it to that from now on)
starting off strong with.....
Theia Woodrose β my wonderful mc
Basic rundown of her:
reliable, loyal and very traumatized
was almost a human sacrifice(we <3 mom)
hates her mom(it's not just a phase)
17 years old
ran away from home when she was 9
doesn't use her last name btw
is well trained in sword and magic(self taught)
Liliana Woodrose β The Princess
Basic rundown:
The princess of the Woodrose kingdom
She's 13 years old
Enfp if that counts for anything
Very caring
Has not manifested her magic yet
We <3 mom(but seriously)
Celestine Woodrose β The Queen
Basic rundown:
Bitch. (not affectionately)
Manipulative bitch
efficient bitch
I don't like her
Hates little kids(I'm laughing cause y'all don't get it)
The Queen of the Woodeose kingdom
Hates her husband
she's like 54 years old
Franklin β The dragonborn
Basic rundown:
was human trafficked/a slave
she's a bitch(affectionate)
lowkey sadistic
Reliable
very much "eye for an eye" core
is 23 years old
her hair color is closer to the second one
Tara Theron β The vampire
Basic rundown:
Forest vampire
very sweet and bubbly
will kill you with a smile
but again, very sweet
is away from home due to reasons
17 years old
she's a cutie pie
(SHE'S SUPPOSED TO BE BLACK BUT THE OTHER PICREW I USED WOULDN'T WORK SO THE WHITE ONE IS HER FIRST DESIGN)
Royce Dionne β The fallen prince
Basic rundown:
Traumatized but hot and funny so it totally cancels out(his words not mine)(it doesn't)
16 years old
humor to cope type shit
Used to be the prince of the Dionne Empire
Theia's best friend
Very good with a sword
Griffin Travers β The seer
Basic rundown:
He's a seer(can see bits and pieces of the future)
is very much low-key blind(his prescription goes crazy)
He's only 10(MY BABY)
His father is a guild leader
a very sweet boy, despite everything people say about him
Theia's his best friend(in a kid sorta way)
Asteri ******** β The ghost
Basic rundown:
sassy ass bitch
is stuck in a kid's body for a while but is like 24 I'm actuality
she gets a grown up body eventually dw it's just ghost shit logistics
Y'all get no more info on her
Sennen β ???????
Basic rundown:
We don't talk about him :3
that's for me to know and you to find out
BUT THATS EVERYONE FOR NOW!!!!! I'd love asks about them if you have anything you wanna know!!
BET IMMA DO THAT NOW
should I do character intros so y'all know who tf I'm talking about when I yap?
Rahhhhh thank you!!!!
HI!! this is my writing acc!!
The names Raine and/or Lennox
I'm 17 and I use mainly they/them pronouns with some other ones sprinkled in there plz plz plz
my main is @a-chance-of-raine
so this acc is kinda my kinda restart on writeblr possibly? we'll see how that goes but anyways!! here's some info on me!
I write fanfics and original works!!
I have one wip I've actually started, and 6 others still on planning
I mainly write fantasy or romance
NOW FOR MY MAIN 2 WIPS
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REBEL PRINCESS
"Theia has been planning to kill her mother since the day she ran away. Her mother, the Queen herself, has been abusing her power in ways Theia couldnβt even begin to fathom. Sacrificing children for an unknown god. But the only way to stop the queen includes Theia dying. But Theia believes itβs her sin to fix. It should be a simple task, but when thereβs a more powerful force looming above them all, and Theiaβs guildmates are now in danger, it isnβt so black and white anymoreβ¦"
Badass FL
Found family trope
Family dynamics
TOO ALIVE FOR DEATH
There's no blurb for this one yet, but here's some stuff about it
Black cat gf x Golden retriever bf
Immortal main character
Mafia setting
Fantasy Romance? idk what this counts as tbh